feedback

After presenting my Magazine i got a lot of advice from my peers and Mr. Elsbree. I was told that i had to much white space so i am planning on using one of the class cameras and taking it to the basketball game to get more filler pictures. I was also told to make the magazine more appealing so i have decided to use a border on the magazine and more color on the pages. Lastly i was told that i should put a little more in my article and also to make the font more easily read on the cover and table of contents. To do this i will add in one or two more athletes to the article, also i will put more color in the words and also use a background onto the letters.